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That seems like a after situation to me. I mean, I don’t know how many books you intended, for some reason im thinking 6? But hes to dependent by himself. Hes out of his weight class. Granted that might be a perfect reason to prioritize it. If he cant hope to match his adversaries at least make sure his legacy’s solid
[quote=Malacai;4055]Well, Tom is moving to a more administrative role, rather than a boots on the ground type. It’s also shown that the visit to the library is how he was trying to center himself (though he doesn’t really get a chance to do that), and then he goes to the DoomSpa. So, these are his attempts at relaxing, though not much of it is actually shown. He isn’t really the type to destress by fighting, though he does know martial arts. (The martial training should also be brought up at some point.)[/quote]
That monkey monk tho
I adored all of it. The details lovely. In paperback you can get rid of some of the scenes, the booty call yes, maybe a few of tal gors, though they were really nice for building up for his battle with the alfar, and like one of vaselles. But for kindle? No reason to. Its world building, it was relevant, and entertaining. Your not constrained to word number in ebooks i think?
I’m having trouble buying it. I keep reminding myself that Tom is still young. But his response to Orcus’ memories are hinging on Astlanian Wizard/Talarius twists of logic to make himself feel better. Im not sure what your setting up for. But perhaps theirs a different manner of expressing his disbelief. Because their are some very logical arguments as to that situation and it just feels like the straws he’s grasping at are thin indeed. Maybe thats intentional, but maybe if so their can be some foreshadowing or something of him realizing that deep down?
Another thing that particularly pinged my interest is his response to finding the library of doom, particularly the portrait gallery. He made no real passing thought to actually going to see the portraits of his enemies. I fully understand putting it off after realizing that hey, he probably IS orcus reincarnated, but I think it would go over better if he had intended to check it out after seeing orcus’ portraits, but pushed it back after the revelation, rather than acknowledging it and ignoring it.
[quote=Ben;3811]Just noticed the thread nos says September ETA and trying not to cry lol[/quote]
Its August 30th >_>
I know alot of demons that do that :I and women..not saying theirs any connection to there or anything
