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[color=red]I, Bludflag want to be a beta demon[/color]

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Well,I certainly wouldn`t mind becoming a beta demon for this book 🙂
Thanks for clearing up the process of this book going to Amazon(hopefully for selling a masterpiece),I can barely wait for it(and the new art,current one could have practically been done by which is not a compliment(the harsh truth)).Godspeed author guy >:)
P.S Rewrote the whole thing when I realized how off topic I went,this way it isn`t really off topic(how off topic I can get is debatable).I better go back to proofreading,been a while since I updated my thread xD

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Finally got back to proofing some of the posts on the site(primarily those that interest me),so here goes:
[i][u][b]Mana Pools and Anima Jars[/b][/u][/i]
to the number of mana pools OR anima jars linked to the weilder (note jars do not create feed back with pools
wielder…feedback
Thus for safety reason’s very few mana wielder’s ever
reasons…wielders
While typically an Arcane Device that used a mana pool would have it’s own mana pool
its
say a ring and pendant where the ring actual mana pool for the ring [b]was[/b] in the pendent
where the ring [b][u]is the[/u][/b] actual mana pool for the ring [b][u]in (inside if you wish)[/u][/b] the [b]pendant[/b](why did you put was,did you reword the sentence or something?)

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[b][u]The Jötnar Races [/u][/b]

Trolls and Ogres tend to form smaller, isolated family units and can also be found in many [b]region.[/b]
regions

Orc mercenaries are not uncommon in many lands and both Orc and [b]Goblinr[/b] tribes
Goblin

Finally a Sprite, moving up in the ranks :d/

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[color=black][size=8][b]I noticed a few mistakes in the home page[/b][/size][/color]
So here it goes:At the Avatars subsection I noticed that it said Rank III twice(for II and III) so that it looks like a Lesser Archon and an Archon are the same class.When I clicked on Demons(the one where we can see the summoning of Boggy) it said “When not serving mortal men, demons reside in an infernal plane called the Abyss, where the cavort and plan the destruction and overthrow of all mankind. ” the should be they (minor things like this happened all the time to me aswell when I was writing my original Fanfic,it went south so I stopped(got lazy))
Should we methodically search all the posts for mistakes?

[color=black][size=9][u]I made this post purely for mistakes noticed on this website.I would appreciate if this topic stayed as is and that people only post for said mistakes[/u][/size][/color]

I hope the author approves of this post 8-[

P.S On the other hand I can`t wait for the next book =p~

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[quote=The Author Guy;1824]The manner of Golems living together in a manor…that’s on this site only, in the library correct?

I am not finding anything on Golems in the book 1 appendices (I never remember what is where).

2nd Edition is basically just awaiting a cover from the artist. I need to kick him into gear…

I am getting there on book 2, I keep saying one more week…but stuff has kept coming up…but not too far off now.[/quote]

Yes,it is on the site library. Good to know about 2nd edition pretty much concetrating on the picture.
I was way too excited for the second edition(hooked so badly on this, I might need to go to rehab).
Heh, good to know that I`m not the only lazy author out there(when I was one, it was for a FF, but the original story paid 0 attention on magicians even though the MC was one and I didn`t feel like making stuff up while the author would most likely go a totally different direction). I don`t really proofread books that I read since it would only frustrate me,they`re usually long(I generally don`t read short books), I usually don`t have any way to contact the author without too much hassle and I am not sure enough about my English to tell somebody their grammar mistakes(I am absolutely horrendrous with present perfect, not sure why).

Sorry about the wall of text :^o

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[b][i][u][size=7]Golems[/size][/u][/i][/b]
Golems must be constructed in such a [b]manor[/b] as to be able to move
manner
God,waiting for book 2 and second edition of book 1 is pure torture ](*,)

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What can I say Tizzy, guess that nowadays teenage girls are turned on by dangerous decaying and dead people.
I mean not everyone can say they have sex with dead people.[/quote]

Read a manga with the MC being an incestuous necrophiliac. His sister was a ghoul which he revived, pretty similar to Twilight, but Japanese version. They both sucked as all hell( even though I read the last book of Twilight a few times, I regret it). To see how much they suck you have to see it for yourself, words cannot warn you about the incoming horror( while he did not have sex with his sister, it was pretty close). And there goes a few hours of my life, better spent lazing around rather than reading books like those, your book is so much better IMO. ETA for beta demonism? I haven`t really been active on the forums in the last week or two, so I can`t really say I saw any announcement(s) regarding it o:)

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