The World of Astlan

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2020-06-02 at 15:22 in reply to: The chopping block #5827

kyler
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Really a small thing in overall aspect of everything but chapter 124 sentence 3 you said “their shared quarters were a narrow metal walled chamber approximately 8 feet deep, 8 feet deep and at best, 8 feet wide.” i could be wrong but i don’t think that 8 feet deep needs to be in there twice.

2020-06-02 at 15:22 in reply to: Countdown Beta? #5349

kyler
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I would love to hop on this wagon of glory if still avalible

2016-04-06 at 22:04 in reply to: the grammar and wording do dads #6021

kyler
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Really a small thing in overall aspect of everything but chapter 124 sentence 3 you said “their shared quarters were a narrow metal walled chamber approximately 8 feet deep, 8 feet deep and at best, 8 feet wide.” i could be wrong but i don’t think that 8 feet deep needs to be in there twice.
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