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    Boggy frowned; this was very clearly frown Talarius thought

    Should be an “a” between clearly and frown.


    If he had to guess, all three were fiends like Tizzy.

    Only two other demons came through with Tizzy so that should be “both were fiends like Tizzy.”


    “He is my hostage.” Something true! He will not harm you, nor will you harm him. He is part of my strategy. He glanced at Talarius,

    The highlighted portion should be in quotation marks since Tom is talking to the D’Orcs.

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