Hi,
So I’m revisiting the TOC question. I think we sort of left the “level” of the TOC to be:
Paperback: Chapters Only
Kindle: Chapters+Scene
However, looking at the last chapters, leaving the scenes in tells the reader in advance a lot about what is coming.
Is it too much? I had thought it would be helpful in sorting how who said/what when for people that wanted to recheck something earlier, but as it gets particularly in the 140’s it becomes very clear there is going to be a big battle in Nysegard.
Is this too much information for someone just starting the book? Pre-Nysegard scenes?
One alternative would be to have chapter only Kindle ToC, but perhaps a scene index appendix at the end? I think I can make that work. Does it add value? I.e. worth the time?