beta 2 chapter 145 citadel meeting

[fallen_one_84]

time travel and an extra person.

[fallen_one_84]

alright first off in
chapter 144
Citadel of Light,
Shrine of Doom: Late
Fourth Period

Karis Crooked Stick is waiting for word from mount doom.
the gate opens and out steps.
There were three human sized people to the front with a very large, ugly
winged orc behind them.

skip to 145
its suddenly
Citadel of Light,
Shrine of Doom: Mid-
Fourth Period

some how we travel back in time a half period.
then he De-summons and summons Targh.

then skipping to the meeting.

Citadel Command
Center: Late Fourth Period

Behind Karis came two knights in armor,
one with a large cloak, behind them was some sort of young wizard with
curly black hair and a seriously magical metal staff with a demon’s skull on
top. Flanking the wizard were two of the scariest looking D’Orcs
Teragdor had ever seen; although given that he had only seen about a
dozen D’Orcs in his life, that was not as strong of a statement as it might
have been.

suddenly there are 2 D’Orcs.
Targh Bowelsplitter and Darg-Krallnom

so when he is summoning Targh Bowelsplitter he should also summon Darg-Krallnom or have him also step out of the travel gate.
so that a second D’Orc just doesn’t just pop up out of no where.
during the Citadel Command Center: Late Fourth Period scene.

[The Author Guy]

So the time thing is a screw up as I rearranged stuff in time in the alpha’s that’s a mistake.

In the current version, after testing whether he can summon Targh, he says he’s going to re-open the runic gateway and others will come through to start setting up.

The command center is a bit later in time after the RG is settled, and Dargh-Krallnom came through.

I have updated the last sentence in the temple to have tom say:

“I just want to open the runic gateway and update everyone there, we’ll have a few more people come through to start preparations.” Tom told the battle priestess. [color=blue] “I am also going to have Darg-Krallnom join us.”[/color]

[Author]

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