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  • 2020-06-02 at 15:18 #1361
    Iume
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    2020-06-02 at 15:22 #5858
    Iume
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    The only time Ruiden is a character is a short scene in Chapter 119. The reason he talks to help Talarius with his struggle. Yet all the other times later in the book that Talarius struggles with faith vs. evidence Ruiden says nothing.

    Nor does Ruiden make any comments about Nysegard or the potential for a fight.

    I think Ruiden would serve as a good way to stand in for the reader is exploring Talarius’s struggle and should be more active in this book.

    2020-06-02 at 15:22 #5859
    The Author Guy
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    I agree.

    He will be coming back as a sword golem for the end of the book, but he should be doing something in the mean time. We know he can talk to Talarius.

    Yes, I think this could be interesting/fun.

    Great idea!

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