Alpha 1 – Chapter 123

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    The implication is that nothing was out of the ordinary. Damien is looking to see if anything is odd with the two, but since he never says anything, we assume he sees nothing suspicious.

    I could add a line to indicate that Vaselle understood no reaction to be “nothing wrong”

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    When Vaselle and Damien meet Treg & Stevos we have this line: Vaselle noted that as he had stood Damien had twisted his hands and moved his mouth ever so slightly to invoke his wizard sight.

    Why did Damien invoke his wizard sight and did he see anything out of the ordinary? Since Stevos is there you would expect something. In fact there is NO follow-up to this line. Did you edit something out and forget to remove this line too?

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