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2020-06-02 at 15:18 #1221

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2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4205

Rosver
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“We’ve gotten rid of the demons,…”

-I’m not really very good in english but I think this does not sound right. Though it might be me who is wrong.

2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4206

The Author Guy
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I think it is technically correct, or tolerable, but reading it, even out of context, I don’t like the word choice. I think it can be said more in character/artfully.
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