(106.2) Issues

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    CrispyMouse
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    Beta 2:
    [quote]Stevos chuckled softly, yet in a friendly matter. “[h]Stevos[/h], you have nothing to worry about.”[/quote]

    Pretty sure that should be “Teragdor”.

    [quote]Teragdor inhaled suddenly and tried to [h]stop[/h]. “What[h]?[/h] You mean[h]?[/h]”[/quote]

    Tried to stop what?
    Also should there be ellipses (…) to show the incomplete thought?

    #1247
    CrispyMouse
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    #4368

    good catch; I had to read a couple times to find out what he was stopping.

    He was trying to stop walking. I.e. halt and stare.

    Fixed that and added …

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