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    Mikey
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    “Vargg was shaking our head. “I think the real problem is that these groups [b]that[/b] try to force some sort of huge narrative on everything. Every conflict must be a battle between the so called ‘good’ and the so called ‘evil.’”

    Remove the second “that”.

    “It’s not just a territorial or trade [b]dispute, no it’s[/b] an ultimate battle for the survival of their way of life!””

    It’s not just a territorial or trade [b]dispute. No, it’s[/b] an ultimate battle for the survival of their way of life!

    I seem to recall this discussion. 😉

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