Alpha0 – Chapter 134

[GameGraphix]

Agreed….when I read this I thought either that I’d missed something…….

or that someone (Tizzy) had done some type of mind alteration on everyone to make them believe that Tizzy had always been there…..

[Iume]

Tom is not surprised to find Tizzy despite that demon’s absence for a few days. Tom was just a few scenes ago wanting to find him ASAP. The surprise/questioning comes later in the scene but that the beginning Tom is like “You three are still up?” Tom asked in surprise.

It reads as if he expected Tizzy to be there.

[Iume]

[The Author Guy]

Will adjust. There was some backfilling there.

When I first wrote the scene, I forgot he was missing, so I went back to try to clarify and probably only muddled it.

[Author]

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