(96.2) Issues

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  • #1246
    CrispyMouse
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    #4360
    CrispyMouse
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    Beta 2:
    [quote]Seemed to circulate among the crowd and Zelda stood and looked at him proudly, and [h]he[/h] thought, quite happily.[/quote]

    Who does the “he” refer to? By the grammar rules I learned (could be wrong) wouldn’t the “he” refer to Zelda? Which does not fit. By context I took it to mean Tom.

    #4361

    Tom. Fixed. put Tom there

    BTW if you have a bunch of these and it’s easier, you can do a single big post and just preface each one with the chapter and section.

    I am thinking that might be faster for you and easier for me to make sure I get them all.

    #4362
    CrispyMouse
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    Just have one more. Sorry about doing it the hard way for you.

    #4363
    Tizzy
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    Hey, why are you so crispy?

    Were you trying to kiss a dragon when it hiccuped or something?

    #4364

    No big deal! I love these catches, it’s very helpful!

    #4365
    CrispyMouse
    Member

    Because I seem to always find a way to get myself burned.

    If there is a fire trap I always set it off.

    #4366
    Tizzy
    Member

    Cool! or rather Hot!

    You would have a blast in the Abyss! You’d probably be setting off those giant balls of flame right and left!

    That could be handy in a deep cave, give everyone some light to read by!

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