(85.3) Issues
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[quote]Although, if they are being picky about who [color=red]the[/color] let back in, it might be best to not be intoxicated. Perhaps we can try it after you meet with your friend?[/quote]
“Although, if they are being picky about who [color=blue]they[/color] let back in, it might be best to not be intoxicated. Perhaps we can try it after you meet with your friend?”
misspelling or wrong word choice.
[quote]I am packed[color=red];[/color] I simply need to hook up my horse and wagon.[/quote]
“I am packed[color=blue].[/color] I simply need to hook up my horse and wagon.”
I think a period instead of a semicolon is proper here.
[quote]Will you hobble the animals dear?” [color=red]I’ll help Master Trisfelt with his horse and wagon.[/color][/quote]
“Will you hobble the animals dear? I’ll help Master Trisfelt with his horse and wagon.”
I think this sentence should be inside the quotation marks.
Yeah that quote mark problem is one I dread, you just have to catch it by being very alert to context of paragraph.
It’s the sort of thing too easy to miss after you’ve read it X times since you think it’s right.
BTW With the () style corrections, as I’ve mentioned. I will be marking the post with a thanks once I’ve corrected in the text.
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