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@Puck

“For example, Orcs and D’orcs were proven to be quite similar to other races.”

Then

“The other races being compared aren’t dragons, centaurs, and dwarfs. Its the various humans of Astlan.”

Hmm… I think humans is only one race.

I don’t expect things to wrap up in this book, I am only countering your point. You claim that: “…the little points connected” when I see a lot of points just floating around. You even manage to support me instead.

So because it is silly, I only have to give positive reviews? Being critical is being too serious? I can’t have negative sentiment for works that are meant to be funny? Being a commedy excuses poor execution? It is OK for works to be subpar if it is ?

@The Author Guy

Wait!

“Just because “you” can’t see or understand something immediately doesn’t mean it’s stupid or useless or has no point.”

I never said that! Stupid? Useless? Has no Point? None of these are my sentiment. I don’t even care if i don’t understant things immediately. None of that is even in my review. If you allow me, I would even copy it here.

The essence of my review is: This book is damn too long for the story it is telling and these new characters are uninteresting.

And I know that these books are really telling just one story. Very much like the Lord of the Rings. And, again, that is not even my complaint. Why do you keep pushing that to me. I don’t even care about that. I can’t really argue about things that I haven’t even thought about.