the grammar and wording do dads

[The Author Guy]

Noted, will try to get organized to make sure I get this when I am at that chapter next.

[kyler]

Really a small thing in overall aspect of everything but chapter 124 sentence 3 you said “their shared quarters were a narrow metal walled chamber approximately 8 feet deep, 8 feet deep and at best, 8 feet wide.” i could be wrong but i don’t think that 8 feet deep needs to be in there twice.

[kyler]

grammar or sentences that are funky

[GameGraphix]

also, to me the word “narrow” implies that the width of the room is smaller then the length resulting in a rectangle – but the sizes 8ft x 8ft describe a square…..

[Author]

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