H Demon Issues

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2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4480

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81: “Assuming his true form, [b]which still gave him twinges to think of it as such[/b], he swooped down to make sure that someone had caught Talarius in his free fall.”

This is a bit clumsy. Also the reader’s re-introduction to Tom.
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