Final Beta & Beyond

[The Author Guy]

I swear I fixed that!

Nargh. Nargh. Nargh.

Am merging changes this afternoon, will make sure it gets fixed.

[The Author Guy]

Hi,

Got the copy back from the editor today. She’s cleaned up a lot of the head shaking, over used “of course”, “however” awkward dialogue tags etc.

I am going to work on merging that with Beta 4.

I am also adding at least one more scene (more if you remind me of what I said I’d do but haven’t). That scene is in the battle and involves Stainsberry, Meteors, D’Wargs vs Vampyrs and Thrinarv.

I am kicking myself for forgetting Thrinarv. The only priest at the Citadel with full access to his god, Hephaestus, who is over on the Isle of Doom. Duh!

Anyway, I hope to have that out early next week and get final opinions/wind up.

So prepare to speak once last time.

After that. I will prepare PDF and epub versions of the final version and post them where the betas are.

T-A-G

[The Author Guy]

[GameGraphix]

small thing….

I noticed in the scene where Hilda and co. are stealing/liberating War Arrow from the Rod’s camp that War Arrow is still referred to as a “he” and not a “she”

[Author]

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