Early Action: Escape from Oorstemoth?
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Hi,
Thinking on bringing in more action early.
One thing that happens offscreen is how ‘N’, Marcus and Tibs escape Oorstemoth and got to Asmeth’s ship.
This was not on my radar at all, but it is action, and bloody. Theoretically, it could be very bloody. ‘N’ is basically an Elven Cuisinart with blades.
Problem is, no one is yet invested in these characters so it would be significant introduction to them, on par with Tal Gor.
And does that take us too far off the Tom chart, if part of the initial problem is too little Tom?
T-A-G
If you are able to describe some of the things you want to describe in a less boring manner and thus be able to cut one or both of the other scenes down it may work. Though you won’t be able to create a particularly good scene, i think.
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