Beta 1 – Chapter 137

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    Well there’s a rather obvious reality gap, something got zonked in there…

    Think there was a cut and paste gone wrong. Changed it to

    Talarius took the pipe and clenched it between his teeth and drew in a breath, the red coals lighting as the oxygen flowed into the pipe and smoke filled his lungs. He turned to look back at the henge as the people started to chant and dance.

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    [quote]Talarius took the pipe and clenched it between his teeth and drew in a breath, the red coals lighting as the oxygen flowed into the pipe and smoke filled his lungs. He turned to look back at the henge as the people started“ Perhaps,” [color=red]Hilda[/color] cautioned, “yet do not [color=red]discount to chant[/color] and dance.[/quote]

    Not Hilda. Also, “do not discount to chant and dance” means?

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