PDF, Page 14
Well, not name, insult name.
Would change to:
Well, not name, insult.
PDF, Page 55, Chapter 122
He was surprised to see Boggy, Reggie, Estrebius and Talarius playing whist at this late hour.
whist? A card game?
PDF, Page 75, Chapter 124
Their shared quarters were a narrow metal walled chamber approximately 8 feet deep, 8 feet deep and at best, 8 feet wide.
a two dimensional room?
PDF, Page 118
lichtshwert should be Lichtschwert (if the german word is intended)