Alpha0 – Chapter 138

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  • #5869

    Good point.

    Something I realized after book 2 was in print. The demon/god language should be multiversal not universal.

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    #5868
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    “Denubian CraftmanshipTM is well known, they are some of the best builders and engineers in the universe.

    universe or multiverse? In fact, it would probably be a good idea to check all instances of “verse” to make sure it is correctly localverse vs. multiverse. I’m not sure in what situation one says universe.

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    Still says universe when meaning multiverse.

    [quote]
    The major-domo demon shrugged. “Denubian CraftmanshipTM is well known, they are some of the best builders and engineers in the [color=red]universe[/color]. If they can DenubaformTM an entire planet in 7 days, what’s a little fortress in the Abyss?”
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    #5871

    See it, please reply to bring it back to my attention in the morning (going to bed now)

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