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“Given that as a mortal, you were able to stand side by side a demon prince and a goddess to slay Knights of Chaos, you would probably be a worthy candidate someday for D’Orcing, or demonizing, I guess.” Thrinarv said.[/quote]
As amusing as this scene was it doesn’t make sense. They know Talarius is Knight Rampart of Tiernon. Even if he is fighting alongside Tommus wouldn’t they believe that Talarius is still sworn to Tiernon?
If Talarius is sworn to Tiernon why would they think that Tommus would consider D’Orcing him?
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Sentir Fallon was enjoying a glass of wine while reading reports from the local archons and prophets when something suddenly seemed off. He could not place it. He set his wine down and began searching among his links and Illumination streams. Dashgar and Inethya! They were gone, gone along with all of Nysegard.[/quote]
Did Tiernon immediately notice that his RIGHT HAND AVATAR suddenly went dark? It seemed strange that we didn’t get anything from Tiernon and instead got Sentir Fallon.
I was thinking that of the scenes we have when the links are cut we’ve got: The Saints, then Beragamos, then Sentir Fallon. To up the pressure consider:
– Dropping the Beragamos scene and replacing with Tiernon noticing that his right-hand guy is gone. Then Tiernon traces it and finds the team is gone, but he can still reach Sentir Fallon.
– Have Tiernon — like a good boss — demand a status report from Sentir and a plan on his desk to resolve the situation ASAP.
– Rewrite the Sentir scene as he realizes that he’s now caught between a rock and hard place. Results for Tiernon vs. revelation. Sort of accelerating snarl the problems his plots have created.