(106.1) issues

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2020-06-02 at 15:18 #1274

Mikey
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2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4436

Mikey
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“As he entered Jenn [b]tppl[/b] a soft but sharp indrawn breath.”

took

2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4437

The Author Guy
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Had rewritten/corrected this once, but now realized it should have been she entered not he entered.

2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4438

Mikey
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Well, the POV is on Gastropé, so either way works.

2020-06-02 at 15:21 #4439

The Author Guy
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Good point…thanks!
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